{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"22227623","dateCreated":"1269964208","smartDate":"Mar 30, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"msposta","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/msposta","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/kordish.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/22227623"},"dateDigested":1532428250,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Commentary Essay","description":"Overall Rubric 4 87%<br \/>\n<br \/>\nStrengths:<br \/>\nStrong persuasive voice with excellent use of real life examples - Brittany Spears, Miley Cyrus, Charles Barkley, etc. <br \/>\n<br \/>\nImprove:<br \/>\nProofread for the following conventions:<br \/>\nProblems with subject verb agreement - makes, thinks<br \/>\nThats is not a word<br \/>\nAdd commas before conjunctions - and, but, or, nor, yet, so.<br \/>\nYou have several runons in the body of your paper. REvise those sentences by separating them or adding the correct punctuation<br \/>\nAdd additional ideas to your conclusion.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}